An October Day
It was a warm October day,
And it was just like you see in the movies,
Children playing in a pile of leaves
And a dad raking them up
Time after time;
The great fall smell fills the air,
Preparing for winter hibernation;
Once you raked up all the leaves,
They would be all over the place in 10 minutes;
It was almost like jumping into
A huge ball pit at Chuckie Cheese’s;
The leaves were like wool on my arms,
It was a warm October day,
And it was just like you see in the movies,
Children playing in a pile of leaves
And a dad raking them up
Time after time;
The great fall smell fills the air,
Preparing for winter hibernation;
Once you raked up all the leaves,
They would be all over the place in 10 minutes;
It was almost like jumping into
A huge ball pit at Chuckie Cheese’s;
The leaves were like wool on my arms,
Nothing could take
The moment away from this picture.
6 comments:
This is really cool! I like it! sounds funn! :D and you have a really cool picture! Its perfect!
I almost had to write about that picture too.
This is an excellent picture and poem! Good job!
That sounds like a really good memory of yours. I like the picture a lot and it definitely fits in with the words of your poem.
I love that feeling, jumping into a pile of leaves. I have not felt that feeling in such a long time!!
I like that poem I remember when i used to play in leaves it was fun, good picture.
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