I really enjoyed writing peoms so here it is.
As I walk up to the 12th tee box at Payne Stewart Golf Course
I notice the audience quietly watching from a distance.
My nerves are raging with excitement, fear, and nervousness.
The heat blazes down on my sunburned skin.
I tell myself "stay calm"
But I felt like there was a surge running through my body.
I line up my tee shot and catch a glimpse of the cameraman,
Thinking to myself "make it good."
I swing back and then through,
And the shot couldn't have been any more perfect.
It was a thrill walking down the hole knowing that I had hit a great shot
And I was helping my team to the top of the leaderboard.
We were all exhausted
It had been and was a long day.
We were all tired but winning Districts we didn't even notice!
5 comments:
I like the way that you decribed the way that you felt.
Good peom.
~SUSIE
That was a great poem. You did a really good job using details and explaining some of the emotions that were happening. The poem goes great with the picture. Great Poem!!!!!!!!!
wow! This is great! I love how you described how you felt about walking up to the tee box, and the feeling you felt after you shot the shot! I love your picture to!!
Awh that is such a good story! It seems like that was a very excited time in your life!
I really enjoyed your post because it described the moment perfectly. I also really like the picture, it fits perfectly!!
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