Thursday, April 26, 2007

Poetry!


In class today I had so much fun trying think of a picture to use for my poem! Then I finally found the perfect one of me and my friends in the lake at Moonshine Beach. That day was so amazing, so I just wrote my poem about how felt, and what I did there! If no one minds I will give you a little sample of the beggining of my poem:


Me and my gang

We happily link our toes to the rocks below

Getting caught up in the moment of playing marko-polo

Feeling as joyous as the fishies below


What did you think of the first lines? I was pretty excited about the writing and can't wait to make it even better by the drafts that we are going to do!

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